Meskipun aku berdiri tepat di lampu

Meskipun aku berdiri tepat di lampu atau matahari sekalipun,
tetap, saya tidak bisa melihat apa-apa.
selalu gagal mencari cara untuk melarikan diri dari sepi Sebelum itu membunuh saya perlahan-lahan,
daripada lari atau bersembunyi
lebih baik aku mengulurkan tangan persahabatan.
Apa pendapatmu?

Hasil (Inggris) 1:

Even though I was standing right at the lights or the Sun though,
still, I couldn't see anything.
always failed to find a way to escape from a deserted Before it killing me slowly, rather than fleeing or hiding

better for me to lend a hand of friendship.
What do you think?

Hasil (Inggris) 2:

Even though I was standing right in the lamp or the sun though,
still, I can not see anything.
always failed to figure out a way to escape from the deserted Before it kills me slowly,
rather than run away or hide
better I held out the hand of friendship.
What do you think ?