Ceritanya bagus Setiap paragraph yang disampaikan beruntun dan teratur, cerita mencakup tema hanya saja ada beberapa kata yang kurang cocok untuk dipakai atau format penulisan masih indonesia
The story is nice Every paragraph delivered consecutive and regular, the story covers the theme it's just there are a few words that are less suitable for wear or writing format is still indonesia
Every good story delivered straight paragraph and orderly, the story includes themes just that there are some words that are less suitable for wear or writing format is still Indonesia